here is my first contricbution, i got billions of WIPS but those two are the ones i am updating at themoment, the first is a Darstalker character, Donovan, that i never finished, only meant for a render, eventually...here is a zbrush render:
the second started as a test for zbrush 4 but will take him to full completion eventually, after i find the time to retopo...
C&C welcome ;)
Abe
Hey Abe,
ReplyDeleteThat's some cool stuff man.
The assymetry on the second image works really well I think. Finish that one for sure.
First image is pretty cool as well, but Im not a big fan of that zbrush shading.
Good job on the cloth. It's a bit dense on folds, but it has the weight and feel of cloth.
Keep it comin dude.
Fred
Hey man!
ReplyDeleteSome really cool stuff here:)
First image - the folds at the front are not consistent with the flow of the cloth on the sides. I cannot read where the tension comes from clearly. Maybe a bit too many of them. Also having a wider range of the wrinkle sizes could help.
- The pose could be a bit stronger in general. There is no strong line of action happening, which would attribute a lot more to the character.
- Kudos on the anatomy! Looking pretty damn good! I would however maybe increase the size of his pecs comparaed to his arms. They are seriously huge compared to the rest. I have a hard time believing a guy can develope such massive deltoids without developing bigger pectorals:)
- something feels off on the feet. They feel a tad too small, as well, the upper arch of the foot is not reading too well.
Second image:
- Not much to say man, I love the expression! I'd love to see how it turns out!
Ok, done commenting:) I hope you will tear me a new one as well on my posts! Keep up the amazing stuff man!
nothing terribly constructive to say, just nice job on both pieces.
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